After the release of my first short story The Ghost at Willow Creek, I wrote a post about the influence behind it. It had started life in the form of my first bush poem, which I had entered into a competition. I felt compelled and was encouraged, to turn it into a story.
Here, then, is an excerpt of the poem: –
A Mother’s Love
Magpies sang their mournful song as she stood and waved goodbye,
The blistering sun bore down upon her back amongst a clear blue sky.
She did not smile, or yell, or weep as she saw him ride away,
For she knew he would return to do it all again one day.
She watched him disappear into the distance, this stoic drover’s wife,
‘Alone; always alone!’ she cursed this God-forsaken life.
‘If only I were a man with freedom where to roam,
I would sooner go back to England, than call this country home’.
And so, she walked back towards the homestead with its walls of wood and stone;
A haven full of spiders with holes for vermin free to roam.
The furniture covered in dust; the floorboards of red soil,
No amount of cleaning could save her of its toil.
She stopped when she entered the cleanest room of all,
Her eyes took in every item ‘til she saw the picture upon the wall.
Her husband’s face in miniature, full of boyhood charms,
She felt her heart race once again of holding his dead body in her arms.
© Debbie Johansson
I hope you enjoyed my first attempt at a bush poem. As a teaser, it gives you some background into my first published short story.
Having said that,The Ghost at Willow Creek is now available as an eBook through Kindle Unlimited. It will be available for FREE from 3-7 February, 2020 in Australia, as well as various other countries, including the United States and the United Kingdom.
Australia, 1886.
Eleanor Mitchell can’t move on after the death of her young son. She begins to question her sanity due to noises in the middle of the night of a child at play that only she can hear.
Has Eleanor lost her grip on reality or does she really hear the ghost of her dead son?
‘A beautiful story. Loved it!’ – Annie Seaton
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Many thanks to fellow blogger and author, Priscilla Bettis, for her review on Amazon. It’s very much appreciated! xx
Main image courtesy of Pixabay
Hey, that’s me! Thanks for mentioning me, and I was happy to review your wonderful short story. The poem is sad and pretty at the same time, love it!
LOL! It’s my pleasure, Priscilla. I’m glad you like my poem – it was certainly an idea that wouldn’t leave me alone. 😉
Lovely to hear a little more about your book via the poem. I often think of poetry as a very condensed form of writing – it gathers the essence that you book expands upon.
Thank you, Kathryn. I agree with what you say about poetry, which is why I felt the need to make this idea into a short story. I felt I could express myself better. 🙂